Talk:The Fire in My Heart/@comment-38197001-20190307022939

Wow, I really like it! I’ve always wanted to know more about Kestrel, so this is great. Just one critique: Kestrel didn’t meet Soar until she was in the breeding program, especially, since Soar wouldn’t get that form until he was much older, so it might be a little unrealistic. But it’s your story, so do it whatever way you’d like.