Thread:Stardust81/@comment-35137341-20190101181041/@comment-35989680-20190102224007

Well I'm mean its pretty clear that that Liam and I-forget-her-name-sorry are gonna fall in love.

Secondly, you ended in the middle of a sentence. I think.

Thirdly, Im not sure if you fixed it but where it says who the chapter is POVed by, Liam's says Lance.

That's all of my complaints, but other than those small stuff its great, you've really stepped up.

Finally, your profile is drunk. Or maybe I am. But I'm pretty sure its the profile. I've sent you 5 messages and your number of edits changes depending on whether you're on the profile, message page, blog or contributions.