Talk:Naming the Stars/@comment-43929887-20200113005242/@comment-43929887-20200113232142

General
alright, I'm pretty sure this is seriously one of my favorite stories on here. (No, TPC and TOS are still tied for this spot along with this.) I read so many things on AAW the day I read the first chapter, but this one stuck to me. I literally had 'Empyreal' stuck in my head for the rest of the day. YOU DID THAT GOOD WITH ONE CHAPTER. YOU DESERVE TO BE AN ADMIN.

Plot
so reading the blurb gave me the sense of-- basically The Giver with a hint of KotLC. I can literally hear that speaker going ''Citizens of Empyreal, insert random announcement here. ''BUT: before you despair, that's not a bad thing. I'm actually writing a story right now that is like The Giver in the same sense that yours is, a sorta dystopian-fantasy-medieval mix. And yours is set in present day. The differences go on, the plot is just similar. And idk, maybe that idea visited Lois Lowry and she made up the rest of the plot, then it came to us. (god that sounds abstract, but seriously, there's an entire book on it)

Cliche-o-meter: 3/5

Characters
OMG

HOW DID YOU MANAGE TO NOT PUT DILLON AS A MAIN INSTEAD

Seriously, if it isn't just to avoid Giver plagiarism, I'm giving you major willpower points. *applause*

BUT WAIT- then there's Vesper, darn

I'm still giving you credit for making the popular, rich cool guy a main.

Cliche-o-meter: 1.5/5

alright that's everything for now I guess

It's shorter than I expected

(also I ship Vespion before I actually meet Vesper)