Talk:Smoldering Fire/@comment-35137341-20190109214159

Okay. As a judge, I'm supposed to be giving out feedback (but tbh i'd do it anyway because this deserves it :DDDDD) and I'd like to say that it's great, and while all submissions are awesome in their own ways, this one is amazing. Things I must suggest to critique you is that 'Kestrel' is spelled wrong in the prologue. That's just me nitpicking, though, you should be proud. A couple of great things that I'd like to point out is that you did a spectacular job of a balance between dialogues and Ember's thoughts. As an author, that's hard for me. Balancing between the outside world and the internal feelings of a character are very hard, and something that I have grueled over. You executed it beautifully, give yourself a pat on the back. I hope to see more :DD