Thread:Skyfire111/@comment-39024013-20190519102302/@comment-39024013-20190520074810

Ok, here is my review. You have a touching writing style, great descriptiveness, and a interesting story so far. Here are my suggestions on how to make it better:

1. Give the princess a name, like Rarity or Artful, as a lot of fairy tales have names like that.

2. Give me more infromation on the witch, however refrain from writing a 'information dump'.

3. Nothing else really.