Talk:Warriors: The Final Battle/@comment-37397013-20200206031309

I really like this! As a long-time Warriors fan, it's good to see a well-writen fanfoc like this. However, a few things need clarification. Are these new clans? (Haven't been caught up with the series since the rescue of Wind Clan). Some of the character dialogue doesn't make complete sense, such as Thistlestar not telling Moonlight about the prophecy. There needs to be more description, and the chapters need major extensions (around 2000 words each chapter is my baseline). But overall, this is an amazing work with clear potential. I'd help you edit and such if you'd like!

In case you didn't know, the better a work is, the more I comment on specifics. You clearly have talent and I'd like to help you further that talent as a fellow writer.