Thread:Writing Discussion/@comment-38158014-20190128014130/@comment-36195412-20190128225154

aaah I'll just put this here anyway

Page Title: The Wonderful Adventures of Mosstail

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Brief Synopsis: Mosstail, an extravagant, self-loving ThunderClan warrior, must face challenges of his fellow ThunderClanners in his quest to become the Great Moss.

Critique Requests (if any): I think I'm going too far with the prose? It just kinda feels like I'm describing the scene more than the actual characters. Warn me if it gets too far, and more constructive criticism is welcome. Also, mOSSEH.

Other: Mosstail.