User blog comment:Stardust the IceWing-RainWing/opinions needed!/@comment-40162417-20190805202207

I'll be going by Children of Lightning and How to Save a Life, as well as What Meets the Eye to compare the older and the newer. ''Probably the fact that it snatches your attention at the beginning and shows the character's personality well. From an outsider looking in, it feels very pure,soft, like a person normally shy is releasing their talent.'' t̶h̶e̶ ̶f̶a̶c̶t̶ ̶t̶h̶a̶t̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶ ̶d̶o̶n̶'̶t̶ ̶k̶i̶l̶l̶ ̶o̶f̶f̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶p̶u̶r̶e̶ ̶c̶h̶a̶r̶a̶c̶t̶e̶r̶s̶ ̶a̶n̶d̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶n̶ ̶f̶o̶c̶u̶s̶ ̶o̶n̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶p̶a̶i̶n̶e̶d̶ ̶r̶e̶a̶c̶t̶i̶o̶n̶ ̶o̶f̶ ̶t̶h̶e̶ ̶o̶t̶h̶e̶r̶ ̶c̶h̶a̶r̶a̶c̶t̶e̶r̶s̶ ̶l̶i̶k̶e̶ ̶I̶ ̶d̶o̶
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The dialogue is nice, and the characters are original. I like the characters a lot. I also like how they have relatable thoughts and opinions (for example, in How to Save a Life when Crane knew that Silt was rundown and rock-bottom, but it's where she was hatched and raised, so she won't side against it). Deaths and violence are a little vanilla, but I can bypass that. You could work on the deat hand violence? I also advise that, if a character dies, you can send another one into hysterics. Dark, but it toys with the reader's emotions.
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