Thread:XiaolongDrake/@comment-38303482-20191210233830/@comment-38303482-20191211023120

Yes, I know it needs working on. I know I’m not very good, that it may be confusing. I’ll just ignore your second sentence there. Could you be more specific about anything in particular, please? Saying “it needs some more working upon it” to a story is like saying the same thing to a car. Yes, we know it’s not working as intended, yes, we know it’s it could be improved, but could you please be specific?