Thread:Jaguar Satake/@comment-39375566-20190627042452/@comment-34158552-20190627191705

I love it!!! :D You jump right into the story without wasting time on setup and introductions and all that, and you tell the story with a lot of emotion. It floors the reader right away and you can feel the speaker's emotions because you describe it so well. I'm bad at critque sksksksk but it's awesome!!!!