Thread:Toastedkorekiyo/@comment-38303482-20191209112950/@comment-39375566-20191210012851

I am only halfway through although I am very confused so far. the characters fall flat and their personalities aren't very unique. we aren't given descriptions of the characters whatsoever, in terms of appearance which is needed in any sort of story. I think that for a comic book like, series where there is like one arc of: one pov(being the journals) and another arc of: the other pov

this concept would be good if it was more developed, although its not really good for a story without pictures or anything. I do not mean to sound rude but it is relativity simple and while it is slightly captivating, it isn't nessacrily story material. so far at least but I will continue

again. with more development and though put into the characters and lore and stuff this would be a really cool comic book idea,,