Thread:RobTheBobert/@comment-39375566-20191205233352/@comment-38303482-20191209025558

Sorry about the gender thing, I attempted they/them, but force of habit. I really don’t see any evidence that the protagonist is off their rocker at all. Clunkiness is when something doesn’t flow very smoothly, when you pause, look back, read it again, and realize something isn’t right with it. Could you explain your writing style? If you’re going for eccentricity, you haven’t gone nearly far enough.