Talk:Hopeless Light/@comment-39312933-20190604175152

I like it! I am a judge for the contest, and here is some feedback:

I love the descriptive language!

I was a bit confused... what with the words not being into fully formed sentences. As a writer, when you write, you have a plan in mind, and you give VERY subtle hints at what is to happen, thinking you have made it clear to your reader what is going to happen.

I love the suspense!

Keep writing, and good luck on the contest!