Talk:Hopeless Light/@comment-35137341-20190929150441

Wow, I do love this :)

I like how in the beginning it's jumbled up and disoriented, giving us (the readers) the feel of absolute confusion. I disagree with the comment below this, in fact, and I think that's one of the key elements that makes this story unique to you. You don't have to necessarily "have a plan in mind" or drop subtle hints like Keefester said; that might be Keefester's writing style, but it doesn't have to be yours :p

anyways, overall a splendidly good job~!