Talk:Hidden Away/@comment-38197001-20190305010138

Wow, this is great! I really want to hear more. My only critique would be to put maybe a chapter with another tribe in between the Leafwing ones. It makes it more exhilarating and makes you want to read it more if you leave it at a cliffhanger. Overall, I love it! The characters have real personalities, and I can just imagine it.