Thread:Writing Discussion/@comment-38158014-20190128014130/@comment-37296409-20190220032858

Page Title: The Hidden Ruins

Link: HR

Brief Synopsis: Leopard is a dud. After years of scorn and bullying, Leopard decides to leave her home, and seek her fortune elsewhere. But the world outside is deadly....

Critique Requests: Did you like it? Any loopholes? Improvment ideas.

Other: This is my first FanFic, so...