Thread:Writing Discussion/@comment-38158014-20190128014130/@comment-36195412-20190407145815

Page Title: Jolene

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Brief Synopsis: Jolene has "taken" an unknown "him". However, in spite of the beginning, it isn't what it seems.

Critique Requests (if any): Did I do it right?

Other: Well, I wanted to try horror, and a Tumblr post about this song was interesting, so I did my best.

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Page Title: Spots on the Heart

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Brief Synopsis: What if things turned out differently? What if Spottedleaf wasn't the always-kind, always-loving medicine cat? What if she was mad? And what if...she wanted revenge?

Critique Requests (if any): Constructive criticism would be appreciated.

Other: An alternate universe on Spottedleaf's death.