Talk:Beyond the Oceans/@comment-36742973-20190406022725/@comment-36742973-20190406131346

First off, I really like the creativity put into this. The names of the tribes are very unique, and don't have a "-wings" suffix, which makes this more unique. I like how you based most of them off of the types of governments we have today.

Some criticism I have is to re-read your scentences. They are readable, but there should be commas in places where there should be, for example.

9/10 stars!