Thread:Firefly Writings/@comment-38834833-20190723052014/@comment-39024013-20190727044740

So in the first chapter, it doens't mention the Robin believes in dragons. In fact, one of the paragraphs hints at him most likely not:

''This story was a work of fiction, of course. But it was based off real life things. For example, the part about the angry dragon was obviously false, since any sane person will know that dragons aren't real. But the part about the treasure in the mountain was most certainly real. Everyone knew it was real. Untitled would pop up in any point of Alvanian history. It was written in ancient texts and old cave paintings, and even people from other lands heard of it. People today have still reported to have seen it, so there was no evidence of Untitled not existing.''

Should I edit it and write how he secretly believes that there is a dragon in the mountain? Also, in the first chapter, there is another paragraph indicating that the village is far from behind Robin, so I found it a bit confusing reading chapter two with Robin still talking to the villagers:

''They walked to the direction of the mountain, some children even started clapping. They made a stop at his house, and Robin packed a bag and made his way to the outskirts of the village. Before his home was gone behind him completely, he took one last look. Maybe we can be saved.''

Sorry if I'm sounding nitpicky. I don't mean to be rude.