Talk:Mistaken/@comment-36267749-20190103021145

ahhhhhh the awesomeness

it burns

One nitpick - each time a new person talks, you would have to create a new paragraph. For example:

"'It's Daphne." She said, mock-annoyed and loving the charade.

"Hello, 'It's Daphne'." He chuckled at his own joke, something no one but dads and really charming people do. Before, in her book, it used to be just dads, but she'd had to add the 'really charming people' part after meeting this dude, whoever he was.

"And you?" She asked innocently."