User blog:UltravioletDragon/Want to help me with my characters? Please do!

So, here are the characters from my evolving Dance of the Sun and Moon and the Spaces Between story. Please come help! Little details and suggestions, like Li's favorite food is blackberries, and Lantana still sucks her thumb. I have a few little notes below.
 * I have vague ideas of the characters beyond what's written. Sometimes something won't match those, so I'll put it with another character who it does belong to.
 * The characters are 13-16. And they're witches. But not like Harry Potter. Oh, and 'eeba' just means nonbinary.
 * Taebry and Maj, Li and Chanzhe, and Zhri and Gala are my main characters, so I'm more detailed on them.
 * Please ask me anything!

Characters (Sorted by Hogwarts house because why not?)
GRYFFINDORS

Clove Nere and Juro: Clove's got a bit of a big head, as does her wolf familiar, Juro, but that doesn't mean the two of them aren't good on the ground.

Yaya Mya Dry Flower and Kaburr: Yaya Mya may be Taebry’s best friend, but this Latarashikush girl and her golden eagle, Kaburr, are daring, bright-souled hunters independent from their more powerful friends.

Onoklel Plu and Diarmuid: Ono and his musk deer, Diarmuid (he has vampire fangs and it's awesome!), run into things head-on. These boys always think they can make the jump.

Orchid Gheha and Raban: Orchid is fiery like the sun, fiery like her red crow familiar, Raban, would suggest.

RAVENCLAWS

Li Tzang and Chanzhe: She might be from a tiny town, but this shy girl and her hare familiar are going to go places, even if they don't know it yet.

Jin Aleya and Feba: An eeba from the southern jungles, Jin and their flying fox, Feba, always have a new perspective on everything, when they bother to share it.

Qualla Su and Orlie: Qualla and her red panda, Orlie, aren't great with people. Everyone sees them as cuddly and sweet, not as sneaky ginger ninjas. Therefore, they will be sneaky ginger ninjas.

Lantana Maha and Lilla: Lantana and her pangolin familiar, Lilla, are the sweeties of the group. They'll curl up under pressure.

HUFFLEPUFFS

Taebry Split Tap and Maj: Taebry is a native of a small Latarashikush horse tribe, and Maj is their (they’re eeba) beautiful bay mare familiar. These two know rather more than they let on.

Way Santar and Jade: Jade's the biggest familiar in their group, a perked-ear rhino, but she and her boy, Way, are gentle and rather good-natured.

Ciohan Calf Blood and Obera: This Latarashikush boy and his yak could very well spend the rest of their lives wandering the world. Explaining things to them takes skill.

SLYTHERINS

Aicha Kellsrm and Saan: Aicha’s a male witch— not the most common thing— but he, for one, is planning to make the best of it. He’s got a good eye for medicine, helped along by his eeba silver fox, Saan.

Rioa Lam and Yv: Rioa's got a bossy streak several miles wide, probably acquired from her serow (antelope-goat) familiar, Yv. Good luck keeping these two somewhere they don't want to be.

Tara Jree and Kazuki: Tara and Kazuki, her otter, are the jesters of the group, but like otters in general they have a violent streak when cornered.

Zhri Pamacanlo and Gala: Zhri and Gala, her tiger, are both quiet, but don't be fooled; they've got power to their teeth, even if they don't use it much.