Thread:Writing Discussion/@comment-38158014-20190128014130/@comment-35137341-20190128223642

Page Title: A Destiny of Jealousy

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Brief Sypnosis: A short story about how jealousy can backfire at the most powerful people in the most twisted ways.

Critique Requests (if any): I don't know how to end the story. I want to highlight that they died in a mysterious way, and I don't think a smile really does that job, because I went over it multiple times and I realized why the frick would they be smiling?

Other: None apply.